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I forgot your name
lost among the utility bills
and the magazine subscriptions.
I forgot to remember
who you were when we met.
The distant boy
(who you are still)
the dreamer,
only on occasion ready
to share your inner thoughts
long after everyone else
has already found you out.
And if I remember you now,
it is only because
this all reminded me of you.
Because immersed as I am
in the problems of the world,
I have forgotten how to scream,
How to clear my head,
how to let you go.
©2008-2009 ~nuxxmadness
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It always catches me by surprise, but here it is.
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Thirty points for hitting me where it hurts.

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I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....
Hitting you where it hurts, huh? :P I take no responsibility. It's all open to interpretation.

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"...I'm gonna love you till the heavens stop the rain, I'm gonna love you till the stars fall from the sky for you and I." - Jim Morrison
You have certainly succeeded in your quest for rhetorics.

--
I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....

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